new layout! feedback?

[teendown]

i have another new layout that i need help on haha (:
i like it, but feel that it needs a little something extra, i just don't know what!
any and all feedback is greatly appreciated! (:

here it is::

http://i679.photobucket.com/albums/vv15 ... ayout7.png

[olivia]

It's a little too bright and using celebrity photos is a little 1999.

[MiaWithLove]

I agree with Olivia, you should darken it up a little! It's also a little bit too tall, you should not have to scroll down to far to see the content on any website. But I like the textures and brushes you used, the images also seem fun and bouncy! I like were you're going with it ^__^

[teendown]

okay, complete redo (:
im not finished, but i dont even know if i should continue in this direction
help?

here it is::

http://i679.photobucket.com/albums/vv15 ... ayout8.png

[VisualRevel]

It's really bright and i don't really like when people use hollywood photography when it isn't their own.

For the mac one, it's confusing as to why it's on a mac screen...

Just darken it and use drawings instead.

[teendown]

It's really bright and i don't really like when people use hollywood photography when it isn't their own.

For the mac one, it's confusing as to why it's on a mac screen...

Just darken it and use drawings instead.

okay thanks (:
and the reason i used a mac screen was because i was trying to say that in graphic design you're limited to what your computer can do, but we need to "escape the boundaries" and go beyond that (:

[teendown]

okay, i went back to the original and attempted to make it higher and darken it . . .
what do you think of it now?

here it is::
http://i679.photobucket.com/albums/vv15 ... out7-1.png

[RiceAddikt]

The colors and textures are nice and it looks much better darker, but a few things:

1. Random bright tealish glow streak or whatever looks awkward. Also, the brush does too - lower opacity or try a different one.
2. Have center Kristen be main focus in that you can't see the arms of the other ones; it'll look much better that way.
3. Having the pink suddenly cut off midway is a little weird, so figure out what you want to do there.
4. I too agree that using celeb photos is not exactly the richest choice, but it's not a bad layout.